As I was enjoying a Pepperidge Farm cookie (or two) this morning, I read the side of the package. I liked the writing so much that I wanted to share it with you. Here is what it said:
The Art of the Cookie
by Pepperidge Farm
Begin with a baker’s soul. Seek the finest ingredients. Explore nature’s infinite variety of flavors and textures - sweet, crunchy, rich…oh, and chocolate.
Entertain inspirations. Embrace decadent cravings. Reward yourself.
Open…Taste…Delight.
Thank you for letting us share our creations with you. Gratification guaranteed.
Notice how each sentence opens with a verb. These are not just any verbs, but ones which have been carefully selected by an talented writer. Begin, seek, explore, entertain, embrace, reward, open, taste, and delight are verbs which intrigue, invite, and ignite the reader.
In addition, beginning the sentence with a verb sets “you” as the subject of the sentence. That pulls in the reader and personalizes what he or she is reading. Involving the reader delivers the message effectively.
Most importantly, the verbs tell the reader what to do. They start by explaining how Pepperidge Farm creates these cookies, “Begin with a baker’s soul….” They continue by getting lost in the experience of enjoying one of these cookies, which are scrumptious. They end with a “Thank you.” After reading this, I felt that the writer was sitting at the table indulging in one of these cookies along with me.
This was written from the customer’s point of view.
Writing from the customer’s point of view is an effective way to connect with your customer. These words share that Pepperidge Farm is giving the customer what the customer wants. They show how Pepperidge Farm begins with the customer’s wants in mind, creates what the customer wants, and appreciates the customer’s business. They tell the customer what the customer gets when he or she savors one of these cookies and that this experience was deliberate. They communicate that the customer’s enjoyment was Pepperidge Farm’s goal.
Are you doing this with your communications? Are you sharing why and how you do what you do? Are you telling your customer that you understand your customer’s point of view?
Take a look at your communications with your customer. If you are not doing this, adjust so that you do.
Remember, using the customer’s point of view makes your communications powerful.
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